"I just moved here from Florida."

That sentence contains at least five follow-up questions she WANTS you to ask. Where in Florida? What brought you here? How long have you been in the area? What do you miss? How does it compare to here?

She handed them to you on a silver platter. And you said, "Oh cool. I come here every week. I love this band. Ummm... pretty crowded tonight."

She smiled politely. Nodded. And never texted you back.

I was that guy for years. Talking too much. Listening too little. Panicking about my next sentence while she was literally feeding me the answers.

Then I found 22 rules that fixed the whole thing. Rule number one: shut up and listen. She'll tell you exactly what to say.

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I'm writing/directing a short fillm about two don juans, help me out

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The story is based on two friends. both ladies men, but completely different in personality. One is a charming, witty, somewhat arrogant man (think james bond), and the other is a foul, abnoxious loud mouth (chris tucker maybe?)

but anyway while in the process of writing, I've realized that I don't have to many experiences in this department, So would any of you happen to have any crazy experiences involving seducing a girl using wit, charm or ego?

I'm not making any money off of this video, it's for experience only, but I'll credit any stories I choose to use (unless otherwise requested).

thanks
 

"I'm Not Looking for Anything Serious Right Now"

When a woman says it, guys hear a confession. A heads-up. A scheduling conflict.

Here's the translation: I don't feel anything. Right now. With you.

Watch what happens when a man triggers actual attraction. The busy career, the recent breakup, the "not in a place to date" — all of it evaporates instantly. The same woman who was guarding her freedom is suddenly free every night.

The "22 Rules" explain why. When the right switches flip, her timeline rearranges itself around you.

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Hey, if you need co-writing or a critique, let me know. I'd love to collaborate and/or help. My sense of humor involves people saying and acting in extreme terms, especially when they're pissed off or frustrated.

BTW, for some background/inspiration/comparison, check out this well-written, well-acted, low budget indie web series on YouTube about a couple of AFC's. The intro theme on epi 1 kinda sucks. They switch to a better one on episode 2...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=omE_8VJN9Eo
 

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GtarPlayr73 said:
Hey, if you need co-writing or a critique, let me know. I'd love to collaborate and/or help. My sense of humor involves people saying and acting in extreme terms, especially when they're pissed off or frustrated.

BTW, for some background/inspiration/comparison, check out this well-written, well-acted, low budget indie web series on YouTube about a couple of AFC's. The intro theme on epi 1 kinda sucks. They switch to a better one on episode 2...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=omE_8VJN9Eo
haha, it's funny that you mentioned that, cause I've seen all the episode. Great show, the character's personalities blend together beautifully. And I was kinda using that as a guide to creating loveable characters and hilarious situations (although mine are gonna be way more exaggerated).

It's too early in the stage to know if I'll want any writing help, but I'll let you know if I do.
 

"How I Made Sure No Woman Ever Friend-Zoned Me Again"

She calls you when her car breaks down. When she needs help moving. When some guy she's actually dating treats her badly.

You're the listener. The reliable one. The guy who would treat her so much better, if she'd just open her eyes.

She won't. You trained her to see you as the low-effort option — the friend who requires zero risk and zero investment. Every favor dug the hole deeper.

The "22 Rules" break the pattern. You'll stop auditioning for a role she already cast and become the man she chases instead. It starts with Rule 1.

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oh man i just caught all 9 episodes, SOOOO HILARIOUS!
 
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