"She's Out of Your League"

You've said it a hundred times. Maybe a thousand. And every time you say it, you train your brain to freeze the next time she walks into the room.

Leagues are a myth invented by guys who are scared of women.

She's a person. She has bad breath in the morning. She picks songs she can't sing in the shower. She overthinks her own texts.

Walk over. Say something. The league dissolves the second you open your mouth.

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I'm writing/directing a short fillm about two don juans, help me out

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The story is based on two friends. both ladies men, but completely different in personality. One is a charming, witty, somewhat arrogant man (think james bond), and the other is a foul, abnoxious loud mouth (chris tucker maybe?)

but anyway while in the process of writing, I've realized that I don't have to many experiences in this department, So would any of you happen to have any crazy experiences involving seducing a girl using wit, charm or ego?

I'm not making any money off of this video, it's for experience only, but I'll credit any stories I choose to use (unless otherwise requested).

thanks
 

"She Made Her Decision Before You Finished Your Sentence"

Three seconds. That's how long it took. Your shoes. Your posture. The way you held your drink. Whether you looked at the floor or looked at her.

She already filed you away. Interesting. Boring. Safe. Bold. Before you even opened your mouth.

Everything you say after that is just her confirming what she already decided.

So stop rehearsing lines. Fix the first three seconds. Stand tall. Look up. Smile like you mean it. Walk like you belong wherever you're standing.

The words come later. The impression comes first.

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Hey, if you need co-writing or a critique, let me know. I'd love to collaborate and/or help. My sense of humor involves people saying and acting in extreme terms, especially when they're pissed off or frustrated.

BTW, for some background/inspiration/comparison, check out this well-written, well-acted, low budget indie web series on YouTube about a couple of AFC's. The intro theme on epi 1 kinda sucks. They switch to a better one on episode 2...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=omE_8VJN9Eo
 

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GtarPlayr73 said:
Hey, if you need co-writing or a critique, let me know. I'd love to collaborate and/or help. My sense of humor involves people saying and acting in extreme terms, especially when they're pissed off or frustrated.

BTW, for some background/inspiration/comparison, check out this well-written, well-acted, low budget indie web series on YouTube about a couple of AFC's. The intro theme on epi 1 kinda sucks. They switch to a better one on episode 2...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=omE_8VJN9Eo
haha, it's funny that you mentioned that, cause I've seen all the episode. Great show, the character's personalities blend together beautifully. And I was kinda using that as a guide to creating loveable characters and hilarious situations (although mine are gonna be way more exaggerated).

It's too early in the stage to know if I'll want any writing help, but I'll let you know if I do.
 

"The Coffee Shop Girl You Never Spoke To"

You've replayed it a hundred times. She stood three feet away, scrolling her phone. You had an opening. You composed the perfect line — after she was gone.

For all you know, she's married now. To some guy who said something. Anything.

Openers are cheap. Almost any sentence works when it's delivered within three seconds. The expensive part is the standing there, drafting and deleting, while the window quietly closes.

The "22 Rules" stripped out my hesitation. What to open with, how to keep it alive, and the one habit that costs guys more women than anything else: waiting for perfect.

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oh man i just caught all 9 episodes, SOOOO HILARIOUS!
 
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