"I'm Not Looking for Anything Serious Right Now"

When a woman says it, guys hear a confession. A heads-up. A scheduling conflict.

Here's the translation: I don't feel anything. Right now. With you.

Watch what happens when a man triggers actual attraction. The busy career, the recent breakup, the "not in a place to date" — all of it evaporates instantly. The same woman who was guarding her freedom is suddenly free every night.

The "22 Rules" explain why. When the right switches flip, her timeline rearranges itself around you.

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I'm writing/directing a short fillm about two don juans, help me out

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The story is based on two friends. both ladies men, but completely different in personality. One is a charming, witty, somewhat arrogant man (think james bond), and the other is a foul, abnoxious loud mouth (chris tucker maybe?)

but anyway while in the process of writing, I've realized that I don't have to many experiences in this department, So would any of you happen to have any crazy experiences involving seducing a girl using wit, charm or ego?

I'm not making any money off of this video, it's for experience only, but I'll credit any stories I choose to use (unless otherwise requested).

thanks
 

"The Coffee Shop Girl You Never Spoke To"

You've replayed it a hundred times. She stood three feet away, scrolling her phone. You had an opening. You composed the perfect line — after she was gone.

For all you know, she's married now. To some guy who said something. Anything.

Openers are cheap. Almost any sentence works when it's delivered within three seconds. The expensive part is the standing there, drafting and deleting, while the window quietly closes.

The "22 Rules" stripped out my hesitation. What to open with, how to keep it alive, and the one habit that costs guys more women than anything else: waiting for perfect.

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Hey, if you need co-writing or a critique, let me know. I'd love to collaborate and/or help. My sense of humor involves people saying and acting in extreme terms, especially when they're pissed off or frustrated.

BTW, for some background/inspiration/comparison, check out this well-written, well-acted, low budget indie web series on YouTube about a couple of AFC's. The intro theme on epi 1 kinda sucks. They switch to a better one on episode 2...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=omE_8VJN9Eo
 

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GtarPlayr73 said:
Hey, if you need co-writing or a critique, let me know. I'd love to collaborate and/or help. My sense of humor involves people saying and acting in extreme terms, especially when they're pissed off or frustrated.

BTW, for some background/inspiration/comparison, check out this well-written, well-acted, low budget indie web series on YouTube about a couple of AFC's. The intro theme on epi 1 kinda sucks. They switch to a better one on episode 2...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=omE_8VJN9Eo
haha, it's funny that you mentioned that, cause I've seen all the episode. Great show, the character's personalities blend together beautifully. And I was kinda using that as a guide to creating loveable characters and hilarious situations (although mine are gonna be way more exaggerated).

It's too early in the stage to know if I'll want any writing help, but I'll let you know if I do.
 

"You'll Never Feel READY to Walk Over"

Next Monday you'll feel more confident. After the gym you'll feel more confident. After one more drink you'll feel more confident. After you get a better haircut, a better jacket, a better job.

You've been "getting ready" for two years.

She's standing ten feet away right now. She'll be gone in four minutes. No amount of preparation will manufacture the courage that only comes from moving your feet.

Walk over. Stumble through the first sentence. Let it be clumsy. Let it be imperfect. You will feel more alive in those ten seconds than you have all month.

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oh man i just caught all 9 episodes, SOOOO HILARIOUS!
 
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