please help me and critique this attempt at girl

[neonlimited]

Saturday Night - Went out to a hookah bar with a group of people, a girl came with who I did not know, sat down, talked to her, introduced myself and we talked a while about random stuff, and then i mentioned I was going to a jerry springer show and she should come.. got her number, and when i left isaid i had to go but ill call you about the show.

I feel like I had no game whatsoever, what did I do wrong?

I even did a little kino.

what else coudl i have done?

 

[Jay Jay]

I can't answer your question until you let me know:

1. Did you have a hookah?

2. If you did have one what flavour tobacco did you smoke?

Seriously. You met her, asked her out, got a number and ejected. That was a tidy little operation. Well done.

 

[dtrg]

i know that feeling tho i think. when you feel like you do an awful job but you still have success. it obviously wasnt that bad man. first impressions do mean a lot but i think in your case you have the oppurtunity to make an even better second impression. just relax, make the call, have a nice night out and youre good. jerry springer, that is gold man.