Huge Favor!!!

[drkpassenger]

Hello guys, I'm trying to do this whole online dating thing, so far I haven't really had any success. Typical story right? but I've been trying to integrate characteristics that women might find attractive. I know that the internet is no supplement for actually interfacing with someone face to face but I am using it because its convenient because I'm going to be active duty military for the next 9-10 months and I won't really have the opportunity to go clubbing. Plus, it can help to develop my conversational skills. I know its alot to ask, but can you read over my OKCupid profile and give me some advice? Too much? Too little? General impressions? I respect the collective wisdom of the forum and would greatly appreciate it.

http://www.okcupid.com/profile/whats_up21

Feel free to be as critical as you need to be. I have a pretty thick skin

 

[Drewskie]

Needs work my friend. Search this site for online profile posts, there's a few really good ones. Fisrt off, you need to smile in your pics.....much too serious. Also, find some older, or take new ones, pics of you with girls or groups of people doing something exciting. In the about me sections.....don't do what every single other due does, and talk about your qualities......tell a joke, post some link to a stupid website, something like that.......the key iss difference, If you were a girl searching online for a guy.....what woul dmake his profile stand out............that's what you need to think about.

 

[Duffdog]

Pretty much the only thing chics care about in online profiles is your facial picture. Make sure you have a good one--then your set.

From what I have found, those dating sites are garbage. I have much better luck posting an ad on craigslist with my picture and getting girls to contact me than doing the online dating thing.

 

[eatgel]

LoL, your pics look scary as fukk!

 

[Daddy The Pimp]

Change your pictures . Put some where you're smiling and some with your friends. [edit:just noticed now that drewskie gave the same advice]

No need to write all that bullsh1t on how you try to make life of other people better etc.

CUT the crap , get to the point where you display your sex worthy part.