How was this?

[tamvonz1989]

There's this girl who lives across the road from my house. I was walking home from school on Friday (my house is really close). I saw her walking with her friend and then they stopped and turned around. Feeling confident, I walked up to them.

Here's the dialogue:

Her: Hi
Me: Hey, is your name Kelly?
Her: No
Friend: My name is Kelly!
Me: Is it? Nice to meet you, im Tam. *shake hands*
Me: So what's your name?
Her: Kate.
Me: Nice name, im Tam. *shake hands*
Kate: Are you the guy who lives across the street?
Me: Yea
Her: Do you look through my window when im changing? *laughs*
Me: Do you look through mine when im changing? *grin*
*awkward fart noise*
Me: Did u just fart?
Her: What?! *to her friend* Did i just fart? It mustve been my shoes.
Me: Sure...Well, i better get home. Youve got some cream on your lips.
Her: oh.. Bye
Me: Cya

How was that?
I feel like it was good for a first impression.

btw, this is a different girl than my last post.

 

[Skilla_Staz]

The turn around on the dressing comment. Great.

The comment during the fart noise. Normal. Expected. Akward.

Conversation seemed a little short. Cream on your lips comment. Alright. I would've said "Well I can't stay and chat all day. I'm a popular guy. Oh and by the way babe, you got some...stuff....on your lip there."

 

[tamvonz1989]

Wow, i never would have thought of that. I'l keep that in mind next time.

Thanks

 

[Skilla_Staz]

Never miss an oppourtunity to toss in some ****y statement. Don't overdo it, but make sure its a light hearted C&F type thing. Also, if you point out something wrong with the girl, keep it lighthearted as well. Examples:

Bad
You got some nasty lookin stuff all over your neck. So gross

Good
So uh, forget to take a shower this morning babe? (Smile and point to her neck.)

 

[tamvonz1989]

Here were some lines i tried on the same day (to a different girl). It might have a been a lil harsh.

I'm busy doing my work and then she stands up with her ass close to my face. (She was sitting next to me).

I say: Sit your fatass down.
She laughs then hits me on the shoulder.
A few minutes later, she is filling out this questionnaire for an assignment.

Her: What's my name?
Me: Fatass Helen.
Then she has a 'u did not just say that' looks on her face with her mouth wide open and i just turn away and continue my work.
Afterwards, i look at her questionnaire and say 'u spelt fatass wrong'. and then she has an 'smiling embarrassing' look on her face.

 

[Skilla_Staz]

Yah I feel you overdid the fat ass thing. THe first time, if it was playful, was a neg hit. Not C&F. Still works though. The second and third time weren't needed.

 

[Zerotwoonenine]

good intro, if you want to chase her, that would have made a good general introduction and it sets you up later, you could have improved on that fart though...
anyways she seems alittle strange since she said:"do you look at me when i change" the first time she meets you, doesnt that ring any alarm bells??

 

[dannowillbookem]

in a perfect world you wouldve built a little more rapport and then used your finger to remove the cream or whatever, but hindsight is always 20/20 and i think you did great.