Royal Elite
Banned
For all those who keep asking me to hear some of my music
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=236132
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=236132
"She Laughed All Night. Then She Ghosted You. Here's Why."
Dinner ran three hours. She laughed at everything. You walked her to her car thinking this one's locked in.
Then: nothing. Two texts. No reply. What happened?
You did what most men do on a great date. You filled every silence, answered every question, and left her with nothing to wonder about. No mystery. Nothing to sit with when she got home.
Rule 3 of the "22 Rules" changes the ending: tell her a little, hold back the rest, and let her imagination do the chasing. The ghosting stops too.
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"The Coffee Shop Girl You Never Spoke To"
You've replayed it a hundred times. She stood three feet away, scrolling her phone. You had an opening. You composed the perfect line — after she was gone.
For all you know, she's married now. To some guy who said something. Anything.
Openers are cheap. Almost any sentence works when it's delivered within three seconds. The expensive part is the standing there, drafting and deleting, while the window quietly closes.
The "22 Rules" stripped out my hesitation. What to open with, how to keep it alive, and the one habit that costs guys more women than anything else: waiting for perfect.
I give you an
A -for effort. What did you record this on, Pro Tools, reason, fruityloops?
Sounds like you need to take a little of the reverb off the voice and add some compresion.
What kind of mike's did you use...
Something about the vocals sound like you may have done them in an open space or something.
Sayno'
A -for effort. What did you record this on, Pro Tools, reason, fruityloops?
Sounds like you need to take a little of the reverb off the voice and add some compresion.
What kind of mike's did you use...
Something about the vocals sound like you may have done them in an open space or something.
Sayno'
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Your rapping is good, but the quality of the music isn't there. I'm pretty much with SayNO on this one.
The mixing job could be much better.
If you're using Fruityloops, don't. From what I've heard using fruity loops, it's garbage for anything remotely professional.
You definately need to use a limiter or some kind of compression on your voice. Even digital ones work quite well.
If you like, I'll fire you a link of the work that I've done.
The mixing job could be much better.
If you're using Fruityloops, don't. From what I've heard using fruity loops, it's garbage for anything remotely professional.
You definately need to use a limiter or some kind of compression on your voice. Even digital ones work quite well.
If you like, I'll fire you a link of the work that I've done.
is that you rapping fo real?....thats pretty fly my boi.....holla at my boi pj shoul, thats my cousin, he is on this site also, and man he is looking fo someone to rap in one of his new tracks....hes new and will be big soon....email me man at [email protected]
Royal Elite
Banned
I appreciate all of the comments!
I am a hip hop artist and as an artist I make music for fans not other artist! Fans listen to music different then artist! Fans either like the song or they dont they don't usually care about the insignificant points that other artist (producers, artists, recording engineers) listen for!
I believe in perfect imperfection since the is the core nature of humans!
And thanks again!
ps. E_z I would love to hear your cousin tracks I love making music and if his tracks are hot I would definitly spit over it!
I am a hip hop artist and as an artist I make music for fans not other artist! Fans listen to music different then artist! Fans either like the song or they dont they don't usually care about the insignificant points that other artist (producers, artists, recording engineers) listen for!
I believe in perfect imperfection since the is the core nature of humans!
And thanks again!
ps. E_z I would love to hear your cousin tracks I love making music and if his tracks are hot I would definitly spit over it!
"I just moved here from Florida."
That sentence contains at least five follow-up questions she WANTS you to ask. Where in Florida? What brought you here? How long have you been in the area? What do you miss? How does it compare to here?
She handed them to you on a silver platter. And you said, "Oh cool. I come here every week. I love this band. Ummm... pretty crowded tonight."
She smiled politely. Nodded. And never texted you back.
I was that guy for years. Talking too much. Listening too little. Panicking about my next sentence while she was literally feeding me the answers.
Then I found 22 rules that fixed the whole thing. Rule number one: shut up and listen. She'll tell you exactly what to say.