"Stop Asking Your Friends What to Text Her"

Your buddy Dave has been single for three years and thinks "hey u up" is a valid strategy. Your other buddy Mike just got dumped and told you to "just be yourself."

You showed them her text. You asked them to decode the emoji. You drafted four responses and sent the screenshot to the group chat for a vote.

She's been waiting forty minutes.

Put the phone down. Stop crowdsourcing your love life. Type something that sounds like you. Hit send. Then go do literally anything else with your evening.

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"She Wants a Man, Not a Boy"

You asked her if she wanted to grab coffee. Then you asked if the time worked. Then you asked if the place was okay. Then you asked if she'd prefer tea.

Four questions. Four chances for her to say no. Four signals that you're terrified of making a decision.

Plan it. Pick the place. Pick the time. Tell her where to meet you. She'll either show up or she won't.

Either way, you look like a man instead of a scared little boy.

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SAYNO

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I give you an

A -for effort. What did you record this on, Pro Tools, reason, fruityloops?

Sounds like you need to take a little of the reverb off the voice and add some compresion.

What kind of mike's did you use...

Something about the vocals sound like you may have done them in an open space or something.



Sayno'
 

Desdinova

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Your rapping is good, but the quality of the music isn't there. I'm pretty much with SayNO on this one.

The mixing job could be much better.
If you're using Fruityloops, don't. From what I've heard using fruity loops, it's garbage for anything remotely professional.
You definately need to use a limiter or some kind of compression on your voice. Even digital ones work quite well.

If you like, I'll fire you a link of the work that I've done.
 

S-lemond

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is that you rapping fo real?....thats pretty fly my boi.....holla at my boi pj shoul, thats my cousin, he is on this site also, and man he is looking fo someone to rap in one of his new tracks....hes new and will be big soon....email me man at [email protected]
 

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I appreciate all of the comments!

I am a hip hop artist and as an artist I make music for fans not other artist! Fans listen to music different then artist! Fans either like the song or they dont they don't usually care about the insignificant points that other artist (producers, artists, recording engineers) listen for!

I believe in perfect imperfection since the is the core nature of humans!

And thanks again!

ps. E_z I would love to hear your cousin tracks I love making music and if his tracks are hot I would definitly spit over it!
 

"She Wants a Man, Not a Boy"

You asked her if she wanted to grab coffee. Then you asked if the time worked. Then you asked if the place was okay. Then you asked if she'd prefer tea.

Four questions. Four chances for her to say no. Four signals that you're terrified of making a decision.

Plan it. Pick the place. Pick the time. Tell her where to meet you. She'll either show up or she won't.

Either way, you look like a man instead of a scared little boy.

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