OK I underwent a training course today with, surprise, surprise a girl I have seen about the building several times before and got IOI's off.
Anyway, I want to fire her an email message asking her for a Coffee, would be greatful if you guys QA ..
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<Her Name>,
Just a quick email ... you trained me and several others in <System Name> yesterday ...
I have seen you about the building a few times and there is something about you that intrigues me, anyway I was just wondering if you are free to get a coffee some time?
Nath
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Very difficult tow write without displaying low value but this is as best as I can do .... CONSTRUCTIVE advice please ....
Also, If we meet she is bound to ask what intriugues me any C&F answers greatfully recieved!
Moxie
Anyway, I want to fire her an email message asking her for a Coffee, would be greatful if you guys QA ..
===== START OF MESSAGE
<Her Name>,
Just a quick email ... you trained me and several others in <System Name> yesterday ...
I have seen you about the building a few times and there is something about you that intrigues me, anyway I was just wondering if you are free to get a coffee some time?
Nath
===== END OF MESSAGE
Very difficult tow write without displaying low value but this is as best as I can do .... CONSTRUCTIVE advice please ....
Also, If we meet she is bound to ask what intriugues me any C&F answers greatfully recieved!
Moxie