Did I say the right thing question???

[Chosen1]

I need critical analysis of an email I sent this chick through myspace. Yes, the same girl some of you guys said to leave alone in this post www.sosuave.net/forum/showthread.php?t=178018. She says she wants to friends and sh!t which is cool. She is in a situation where her baby daddy is messing with a 15 year old girl. She still want to be with the man so I sent her this message.

"u no i'm still tryin 2 **** wit u if u still wanna creep wit me let me no. tryin 2 romance u take u and yo daughter out and I don't **** wit little girl if thats what u want give me a call when u get up here if not then thanks for the conversation"

That is what I wrote the women. Grammar is not the best at all but what do you guys think comes off as needy doesn't, it or what? Thanks for your answers

 

[Thundernuts]

man, i checked out her myspace, she said it herself she is trying to play the game just like a man, of course she can't but thats beside the point. Just don't stress about this one she ain't nothing special. You didn't really seem that needy just letting her know what you want. Just don't let her use you as the doormat when things with her ex buckle because they surely will. Just put this one on the backburner and move on, remember your the one she needs to win not the other way around.

 

[Mantis Toboggan]

Yes, the same girl some of you guys said to leave alone in this post www.sosuave.net/forum/showthread.php?t=178018.

You know what my advice is: You deserve exactly what you get in this situation. Obviously, I can't speak for the rest of the board, but I hope no one advises you anymore. There's absolutely nothing about this girl that's worthy of dating. Not her looks, not her life, nothing.

And your email sounds stupid. You're 25 and you're writing like a 14 year old in study hall.

Close thread.

 

[Chosen1]

You know what my advice is: You deserve exactly what you get in this situation. Obviously, I can't speak for the rest of the board, but I hope no one advises you anymore. There's absolutely nothing about this girl that's worthy of dating. Not her looks, not her life, nothing.

And your email sounds stupid. You're 25 and you're writing like a 14 year old in study hall.

Close thread.

I don't know why I wrote like that. I can actually use some articulate grammar when I want. I agree with you wholeheartedly that she has nothing really going for that's what I want but not what I really need. Anyways I'll take this info you mantis and thunder gave me and I will move the F on thanks.