Hey, um ive been messing around with my myspace lately and i want some feedback. You can say anything you want, positive or negative. Anyway, here it is
http://tinyurl.com/qgur8
http://tinyurl.com/qgur8
"She Wants a Man, Not a Boy"
You asked her if she wanted to grab coffee. Then you asked if the time worked. Then you asked if the place was okay. Then you asked if she'd prefer tea.
Four questions. Four chances for her to say no. Four signals that you're terrified of making a decision.
Plan it. Pick the place. Pick the time. Tell her where to meet you. She'll either show up or she won't.
Either way, you look like a man instead of a scared little boy.
Critique my Myspace!!!
- Thread starter asdfghjkl
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"The Coffee Shop Girl You Never Spoke To"
You've replayed it a hundred times. She stood three feet away, scrolling her phone. You had an opening. You composed the perfect line — after she was gone.
For all you know, she's married now. To some guy who said something. Anything.
Openers are cheap. Almost any sentence works when it's delivered within three seconds. The expensive part is the standing there, drafting and deleting, while the window quietly closes.
The "22 Rules" stripped out my hesitation. What to open with, how to keep it alive, and the one habit that costs guys more women than anything else: waiting for perfect.
Mr. Delicious
Senior Don Juan
Are you really a parent? If not, you might want to change that cause I wouldnt think too many girls your age would like that in a guy.
I reccomend leaving the parent thing its a great little conversation piece. I had it on mine for awhile and would have girls asking all the time if its true heck i even invented a lil story along with it they knew it was a joke (one actually didn't and seemed to be turned on by the idea ...weird) but its a harmless thing if you play it off as a joke
"She Made Her Decision Before You Finished Your Sentence"
Three seconds. That's how long it took. Your shoes. Your posture. The way you held your drink. Whether you looked at the floor or looked at her.
She already filed you away. Interesting. Boring. Safe. Bold. Before you even opened your mouth.
Everything you say after that is just her confirming what she already decided.
So stop rehearsing lines. Fix the first three seconds. Stand tall. Look up. Smile like you mean it. Walk like you belong wherever you're standing.
The words come later. The impression comes first.
sparky0000
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Music sucks.
Sunglasses are silly looking on you. Without glasses you look like a young Fred Savage. Not good either
. Don't worry, I look worse.
I don't find you funny...So leave that part about people finding you funny out.
The girls that keep on commenting...Lose them. Annoying and ugly. The cutest person to comment was a guy . Not surprising seeing it is California.
CONCLUSION
POSTIVIES -- You are not trying to sound black....You are cute in a young Fred Savage way....You don't brag (well there was that comment about thinking that people think that you are funny)...You are not Skip2mylou. For that I thank you.
NEGATIVES -- You are cute in a young Fred Savage way. Where I ply my trade most 17 year old girls would want to babysit you. Then after they tucked you in they would head out with some old guy :moon: .... You sound boring and predicatable like 99% of the MYSPACE family.
Final Grade: Incomplete. You have potential. For some strange reason I am in your corner.
If you want, I can help you totally redesign that page.
Dude! You are soooo Fred Savage!
http://rob.paintedeyes.org/images/fred8.jpg
http://www.fortunecity.es/bohemio/escultura/55/fredsavage57.jpg
http://www.fortunecity.es/bohemio/escultura/55/fredsavage63.jpg
Sunglasses are silly looking on you. Without glasses you look like a young Fred Savage. Not good either
. Don't worry, I look worse. I don't find you funny...So leave that part about people finding you funny out.
The girls that keep on commenting...Lose them. Annoying and ugly. The cutest person to comment was a guy
. Not surprising seeing it is California.CONCLUSION
POSTIVIES -- You are not trying to sound black....You are cute in a young Fred Savage way....You don't brag (well there was that comment about thinking that people think that you are funny)...You are not Skip2mylou. For that I thank you.
NEGATIVES -- You are cute in a young Fred Savage way. Where I ply my trade most 17 year old girls would want to babysit you. Then after they tucked you in they would head out with some old guy :moon: .... You sound boring and predicatable like 99% of the MYSPACE family.
Final Grade: Incomplete. You have potential. For some strange reason I am in your corner.
If you want, I can help you totally redesign that page.
Dude! You are soooo Fred Savage!
http://rob.paintedeyes.org/images/fred8.jpg
http://www.fortunecity.es/bohemio/escultura/55/fredsavage57.jpg
http://www.fortunecity.es/bohemio/escultura/55/fredsavage63.jpg
You have a good foudation to start off of,now its time to build.
1. Use proper English in your "about me" section.
2. Drop the crackhead on your heros.
3. I would "spice up" yourself as the prize on your "about me" section.
Here is an example from my Myspace.
Imagine this...Your 18,named (blinkwatt) and have all life has to offer. You wake up everyday being thankful for where you are in life. You have decent jobs,the best of friends and the best little sister in the world. At the end of a work day you drop the top and cruise like there is no tommorow loving every minute of it. To you there is no such idea of "failing" in life,only lessons learned. You make the best of any anything and never let an oppurtunity pass you by. Now that you have a glimpse of my paradise,STOP,its mine go get your own..............................................................
1. Use proper English in your "about me" section.
2. Drop the crackhead on your heros.
3. I would "spice up" yourself as the prize on your "about me" section.
Here is an example from my Myspace.
Imagine this...Your 18,named (blinkwatt) and have all life has to offer. You wake up everyday being thankful for where you are in life. You have decent jobs,the best of friends and the best little sister in the world. At the end of a work day you drop the top and cruise like there is no tommorow loving every minute of it. To you there is no such idea of "failing" in life,only lessons learned. You make the best of any anything and never let an oppurtunity pass you by. Now that you have a glimpse of my paradise,STOP,its mine go get your own..............................................................
sparky0000 said:Music sucks.
Sunglasses are silly looking on you. Without glasses you look like a young Fred Savage. Not good either
I don't find you funny...So leave that part about people finding you funny out.
The girls that keep on commenting...Lose them. Annoying and ugly. The cutest person to comment was a guy
CONCLUSION
POSTIVIES -- You are not trying to sound black....You are cute in a young Fred Savage way....You don't brag (well there was that comment about thinking that people think that you are funny)...You are not Skip2mylou. For that I thank you.
NEGATIVES -- You are cute in a young Fred Savage way. Where I ply my trade most 17 year old girls would want to babysit you. Then after they tucked you in they would head out with some old guy :moon: .... You sound boring and predicatable like 99% of the MYSPACE family.
Final Grade: Incomplete. You have potential. For some strange reason I am in your corner.
If you want, I can help you totally redesign that page.
Dude! You are soooo Fred Savage!
http://rob.paintedeyes.org/images/fred8.jpg
http://www.fortunecity.es/bohemio/escultura/55/fredsavage57.jpg
http://www.fortunecity.es/bohemio/escultura/55/fredsavage63.jpg
Yea...um my 12 year old cousin hijacked my myspace....
Anyway, that "good looking guy" is my best friend and my "wingman"
I dont think i look like Fred Savage haha
I will take everyones comments into consideration though. The stuff about the About Me seems to be a common theme and i will fix it up
"You'll Never Feel READY to Walk Over"
Next Monday you'll feel more confident. After the gym you'll feel more confident. After one more drink you'll feel more confident. After you get a better haircut, a better jacket, a better job.
You've been "getting ready" for two years.
She's standing ten feet away right now. She'll be gone in four minutes. No amount of preparation will manufacture the courage that only comes from moving your feet.
Walk over. Stumble through the first sentence. Let it be clumsy. Let it be imperfect. You will feel more alive in those ten seconds than you have all month.
Centaurion
Master Don Juan
Spend an hour or two just browsing all the hottest chick you can find on myspace and send them 'friend' requests. Being the attention wh0res girls are, they'll accept even if they don't know you. Drop some cute comments on their profile, so they drop some on your profile.
It's a great way to work up your 'cyber-social' proof.
It's a great way to work up your 'cyber-social' proof.
Never take any notice of hotornot.com ratings.asdfghjkl said:
There are some fvckin' ugly chicks that get points on there. Hell, i'm running a 9.1 and I laugh at it, because I know it's a joke.
In a nutshell, a 9 on hotornot, barely ever works out as a 9 in real life.
sparky0000
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Which one? Your pic or a pic of Fred Savage?
You just wish that you didn't
.sparky0000 said:Which one? Your pic or a pic of Fred Savage?
You just wish that you didn't
Haha
hmm now i forget what else i was going to say....
O yeah I dont really care about my rating on hotornot, i just mostly care about the individual scores, cause most of the times i have like 1's and 2's (probably guys) dragging down my scores. Most of my scores are 8's and 9's, which is fine for me, i know im not the best looking guy out there but im happy with my appearance. (haha, but when im gaming i think im the hottest person in the world
)Im going to go browse for hotties tomorrow though
Nex
Senior Don Juan
Take off the music.
NO ONE, and I mean NO ONE wants to listen to your music, people usually have something playing on their Winamp and will probably close your page before going through the trouble of turning off your music.
No music please.
NO ONE, and I mean NO ONE wants to listen to your music, people usually have something playing on their Winamp and will probably close your page before going through the trouble of turning off your music.
No music please.
"Nervous Around Beautiful Women? There's a Rule for That"
I could talk to any woman I wasn't attracted to. Charming, funny, relaxed. Then a gorgeous woman looked my way and I'd become a sweating, babbling mess.
The fix took me years to find and ten minutes to learn. Nervousness and excitement are the same physical state — pounding heart, adrenaline, flushed face. Your brain just picks the label. And you can pick a better one.
Rule 16 shows you how. You feel the nerves, relabel them as excitement, and let that energy pour out as enthusiasm. Women notice the guy radiating it. They always do.