"I just moved here from Florida."
That sentence contains at least five follow-up questions she WANTS you to ask. Where in Florida? What brought you here? How long have you been in the area? What do you miss? How does it compare to here?
She handed them to you on a silver platter. And you said, "Oh cool. I come here every week. I love this band. Ummm... pretty crowded tonight."
She smiled politely. Nodded. And never texted you back.
I was that guy for years. Talking too much. Listening too little. Panicking about my next sentence while she was literally feeding me the answers.
Then I found 22 rules that fixed the whole thing. Rule number one: shut up and listen. She'll tell you exactly what to say.
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"I just moved here from Florida."
That sentence contains at least five follow-up questions she WANTS you to ask. Where in Florida? What brought you here? How long have you been in the area? What do you miss? How does it compare to here?
She handed them to you on a silver platter. And you said, "Oh cool. I come here every week. I love this band. Ummm... pretty crowded tonight."
She smiled politely. Nodded. And never texted you back.
I was that guy for years. Talking too much. Listening too little. Panicking about my next sentence while she was literally feeding me the answers.
Then I found 22 rules that fixed the whole thing. Rule number one: shut up and listen. She'll tell you exactly what to say.
pressure0354
Don Juan
um i know the other two said it good, but i think it needs work. example, maybe smile in a picture or two, don't take yourself so seriously, and relax instead of trying too hard to be a hard a$$.
i feel like im watching some lame wanna be model.
i feel like im watching some lame wanna be model.
KingBeef
Master Don Juan
my personal opinion is it's not bad....but you need more pics of girls and female friends....too many guy friends make you give somewhat of a semi-gay vibe
"She's Out of Your League"
You've said it a hundred times. Maybe a thousand. And every time you say it, you train your brain to freeze the next time she walks into the room.
Leagues are a myth invented by guys who are scared of women.
She's a person. She has bad breath in the morning. She picks songs she can't sing in the shower. She overthinks her own texts.
Walk over. Say something. The league dissolves the second you open your mouth.
PowertripII
Don Juan
Are you sure you're straight?
Kings_royalty
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KingBeef said:
I agree, get more pics of yourself with girls hanging out at the beach, bar, or club. Get rid of the pretty sunset and the music, you want something a little more edgy. And the zack morris thing, get rid of that quickly. The waterfall pic, MUST go. The pic in the black shirt was cool.
AlexTheGreat
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what about mine? www.myspace.com/trp_alex
i chose the "simple and slick" profile, tell me what you think
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what about mine? www.myspace.com/trp_alex
i chose the "simple and slick" profile, tell me what you think
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"She Liked You in March. It's October Now."
Attraction runs on a clock.
She flirted for weeks. Touched your arm. Found reasons to be alone with you. And you were careful. Respectful. Waiting for the right moment.
The moment had a shelf life. It expired around month two, and by the time you asked her out, she'd quietly filed you under "little brother."
One of the hardest lessons inside the 22 Rules: women rarely wait. Interest either grows or it decays, and nothing decays it faster than a man who never moves.
Make the move while she's still inventing reasons to be near you.
TxCowboy
Senior Don Juan
Did yall see the picture in the comment section posted by " PinkieMcQUeen" ? ... I think she hit it dead on ....
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realsmoothie
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"God I'm beautiful"?!?!?!? Yikes
And the hard music/soft photography isn't a good mix.
And the hard music/soft photography isn't a good mix.
Gangster Of Love
Master Don Juan
Too much specific info about yourself. Sounds like your questions that you answer are the typical "interview" types. Leaves no mystery.
jack knife
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I don't myspace anymore but when I did I had a few rules.jlr12584 said:
A) no surveys
B) only action photos (no posing)
C) no blogging (unless they were purely humor)
"I just moved here from Florida."
That sentence contains at least five follow-up questions she WANTS you to ask. Where in Florida? What brought you here? How long have you been in the area? What do you miss? How does it compare to here?
She handed them to you on a silver platter. And you said, "Oh cool. I come here every week. I love this band. Ummm... pretty crowded tonight."
She smiled politely. Nodded. And never texted you back.
I was that guy for years. Talking too much. Listening too little. Panicking about my next sentence while she was literally feeding me the answers.
Then I found 22 rules that fixed the whole thing. Rule number one: shut up and listen. She'll tell you exactly what to say.
DasaniWater
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Hey, just be yourself, and if personality comes out to be gay on profile then just accept it.
Kings_royalty
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AlexTheGreat said:
Looks good, a little plain though. Throw a funky background into it, like flames or some sort of abstract art. You can find some really good wallpapers at deviantart.com.
I like what you wrote in the 'who I would like to meet' section. It doesn't give everything away; it makes the reader want to know more...nice.
The pics look good, but get rid of one of the close up shots; one close up pic is enough.
I give you a B+, lol.
TESV
Don Juan
you got the
Gay Abercrombie Wannabee vibe runnin rampant through your @##&$*(. You have got to be joking here!!!!!
Gay Abercrombie Wannabee vibe runnin rampant through your @##&$*(. You have got to be joking here!!!!!
jlr12584 said:
"How I Made Sure No Woman Ever Friend-Zoned Me Again"
She calls you when her car breaks down. When she needs help moving. When some guy she's actually dating treats her badly.
You're the listener. The reliable one. The guy who would treat her so much better, if she'd just open her eyes.
She won't. You trained her to see you as the low-effort option — the friend who requires zero risk and zero investment. Every favor dug the hole deeper.
The "22 Rules" break the pattern. You'll stop auditioning for a role she already cast and become the man she chases instead. It starts with Rule 1.