Criticize my online profile

[djisnice]

Guaranteed bigger as hole then your ex!
If your looking for someone who always agrees with you and gives up his hobbys for you, then you found him.

When im not an ashole Im studying what I love and when im not stuyding im practicing what i study with my friends.

If you take longer time to put your makeup on then it takes for me to eat breakfast then im not interested. Im looking for some that not only have a beautiful face, but also a brain..that is working.

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What do you think? How does it come off?
What needs to re-formulated, added, deleted?
Im thinking of showing who I am a bit more with pictures then with words.

(English is not my native language, so the formulations might be a bit of)

 

[SteR]

You really need to correct your spelling, especially considering you've mentioned 'studying' in your profile..

 

[sylvester the cat]

Disclaimer: This is an honest opinion of the person described by this profile and what I would think if I came across it. It is NOT my opinion of the person who wrote it.

Honestly? You sound f****g retarded.

First you claim the be the biggest A-hole since their ex and then you go on to say you'll agree with everything they say and give your hobbies up for them? WTF?

What is it you love to study? Gay sex?

If you are looking for someone with a brain you are definitely over-reaching with this profile.

 

[Darth]

1. Spelling
2. Drop the facade so that your message is consistent. You claim to be a jerk and then claim to be a chump. Just cut the BS and be natural.

 

[djisnice]

I had a really honest and normal profile about myself and no responses. I read that if it doesnt stand out/shock/is fun, then the reader wont get interested, then its just as all the others.

 

[Stort_Brød]

Guaranteed bigger as hole then your ex!
If your looking for someone who always agrees with you and gives up his hobbys for you, then you found him.

When im not an ashole Im studying what I love and when im not stuyding im practicing what i study with my friends.

If you take longer time to put your makeup on then it takes for me to eat breakfast then im not interested. Im looking for some that not only have a beautiful face, but also a brain..that is working.

ok then tell me what stands out is shocking (except the whole thing and not in a good way) or fun about that? because all that sounds like is a retarded 15 year old trying to be cool. seriously have you even read the bible or book of pook or anything? ****Y AND FUNNY not a$$hole and b!tch.

 

[djisnice]

First it gets attention and then confusion. Then some info of what I do, but still not giving it all away. And finally disqualification. (And not to long...letting the pictures do the rest of the job)

seriously have you even read the bible or book of pook or anything? ****Y AND FUNNY not a$$hole and b!tch.

What does pook have to do with ****y and funny?

 

[Tictac]

Rude, childish, fake alpha.

If you want low self-esteem, cluster B female disasters, your profile is perfect.

Are you really this desperate?

 

[sylvester the cat]

Guaranteed bigger as hole then your ex!
If your looking for someone who always agrees with you and gives up his hobbys for you, then you found him.

When im not an ashole Im studying what I love and when im not stuyding im practicing what i study with my friends.

If you take longer time to put your makeup on then it takes for me to eat breakfast then im not interested. Im looking for some that not only have a beautiful face, but also a brain..that is working.

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What do you think? How does it come off?
What needs to re-formulated, added, deleted?
Im thinking of showing who I am a bit more with pictures then with words.

(English is not my native language, so the formulations might be a bit of)

What nationality are you?
What country do you currently reside in?
What nationality girl are you seeking?

 

[djisnice]

Copy and paste the SAME email to 100 women:

"Gorgeous photos! I'd like you to join me for a drink this Friday night at ____ pm at ______ on ______ street.

Will you meet me there?"

You do this long enough, you'll get responses.

This sounds pretty cold and unpersonal. Maybe even a bit like a maniac. Or?

 

[Stort_Brød]

you ask for our advice, and you get advice from everyone let alone from one of the biggest posters on here who is a Mod and you question it? lol. If what you are doing isn't working then why not try it? it is only POF man what have you got to lose?

 

[zinc4]

agree, texting back and forth is utter time wasting bs..i have been waiting until 2nd message, but first sounds good as well...