Wubbman
Don Juan
Hello all. I had my car serviced yesterday and there was a woman working at the dealership that piqued my interest. We exchanged glances a few times and then I went to talk to her as she was leaving for the night. I introduced myself and asked about the possibility of getting dinner some time. She seemed receptive and gave me her business card (but no personal phone number). She mentioned calling her there or using email.
I kind of felt weird about calling her on her business phone (where I work that would be frowned upon), so I sent her this email during lunch today and have yet to receive a response. If I don't hear from her by lunch tomorrow I will give her a call.
In the meantime, what do you guys think of this email? I wanted to sound friendly and interested but not come on too hard as well.
"Hey Brittany! This is Rob; you gave me your card yesterday as you were about to leave the dealership. What does your work schedule look like on Friday? Would you like to get something to eat? Wanna meet up at a restaurant between 7 and 8 on Friday (I'm in the Army and don't always know when I'll get off work at the end of the day)?
How does seafood sound? I'm not too familiar with Atlanta, but Google shows lots of nice seafood places. If you're not into seafood, there are plenty of other restaurants.
Have a good day. Sell lots of cars!
Rob"
Any ideas on how I can improve in the future should this not work out? Thanks for any help.
I kind of felt weird about calling her on her business phone (where I work that would be frowned upon), so I sent her this email during lunch today and have yet to receive a response. If I don't hear from her by lunch tomorrow I will give her a call.
In the meantime, what do you guys think of this email? I wanted to sound friendly and interested but not come on too hard as well.
"Hey Brittany! This is Rob; you gave me your card yesterday as you were about to leave the dealership. What does your work schedule look like on Friday? Would you like to get something to eat? Wanna meet up at a restaurant between 7 and 8 on Friday (I'm in the Army and don't always know when I'll get off work at the end of the day)?
How does seafood sound? I'm not too familiar with Atlanta, but Google shows lots of nice seafood places. If you're not into seafood, there are plenty of other restaurants.
Have a good day. Sell lots of cars!
Rob"
Any ideas on how I can improve in the future should this not work out? Thanks for any help.