Afc Poem

[AfroThunder1986]

Well I wrote a poem back awhile ago about Killing the AFC inside and becoming a DJ. So I thought I'd write a poem about an AFC. I only spent 15 mins on it, and I used WORDPAD so it kinda messed up when I pasted it in here. But I hope you enjoy. Thanks, AFRO


Once I knew a man who wanted a girl so much, he would set and yern just for her touch.
One day he finally got the courage to ask her out.
She said yes and he jumped with a shout.
"Opps I'm sorry please don't be mad this just makes me really really glad"
"Um ok" the woman said with a very low tone.

The guy couldn't wait to tell all his friends over the phone.
Oh how he had waited so very long.
"Now don't go messin this up" he said to he's self.
But as he thought of her he's heart began to melt.
Time had come to go pick up this wonder girl.
"Oh man I feel like I'm gonna hurl"
He looked in the mirror and gave himself a pep talk.
.Then out the door he went walking he's swaggerly walk.
"Tonights the night" He thought to himself.

He arrived at her house at 7:30 which was a tad bit early.
But he wanted everything to go right on this special night.
He got out of he's car and walked up the steps.
The front door open slowly as he began to peck.
There stood a man about 7 foot tall.
But behind him was the most beautiful girl he had ever saw.
"Now young man I except her back before 10."
He nodded he's head as he gave a big grin.
"My you look stunning tonight, I don't think anything in the sky looks as beautiful as you tonight.
"Thanks" she replied and gave a sheepish smile.

"Where are we going she asked."
"He looked over and said, "anywhere you may ask."
"Wherever you want to she said" "No No No" he shook he's head.
Tonight is about makin u happy and thats what I want to do."well pick for goodness sakes and stop being such a fool"
So they pulled into a resturant which looked like a shack.
"Is this ok its the closest I can think of. "Let's hurry up so I can get back" She replied.
He looked at her and didn't know what to think, but she was done inside the resturant before he could blink. He rushed to get inside and they were seated, he looked at her and just couldn't believe it. "You have no idea how long I've been waiting for this moment."

Everything about you is so wonder and great. "She inturppeted with "Ok thats about as many complements as I can take."
He replied with, "sorry" as he looked down at the table.

She then motioned for the waiter. He came over to the table " I just want a club soda" she said. He looked at her with deep concern, "Oh nothing I just want to get back home. "I'll have what shes having, he replied to the waiter. She then slamed her hand on the table.
"For once can't you be a man and disagree, don't you see your just to big of a wussy for me. I need a man that can take charge and show me a good time. Unstead of a guy that wants to give me good words all the time."Oh, I'm sorry I can change for you, whatever you want, just dont dump me. "Thats the problem you see... you beg for my company" The rest of the date was pretty quiet.
What a night he thought to himself, whats wrong with myself. He must not of noticed he said the last part out loud. Because the girl replied with, "This date has been such a nightmare." He dropped her off at her place, as she got out of the car she looked back and said.. "thanks for the soda I'll see ya tomorrow.

 

[Jay_VCU]

That was so sad.

 

[Evil-Rom]

That was pretty moving.

Just DONT act like that guy.

 

[NYC Dude]

Sad thing is, that's how most AFCs act when in that situation.

And if ANY of you tell a story like that to us, please give me your address so I can beat you with a bus.

 

[PiNkMaGGiT]

woah dude thats really sad/pathetic. I hope you aren't that guy anymore!

 

[Smooth as Anything]

Days ago
How many
Only the trees know

A man now a boy
stepped into a world
of which he had never seen before

A fine speciman may I add
a fine speciman indeed she was
yet our boy was fooled into thinking he was not

Jessica looked deeply into the eyes of Sam
gazing, bewildered at his happiness
his sence of committment
his utter devotion to her
so saw the eyes of Sam

Through the eyes of Jessica we see
creeped out, disgusted, tired, agrivated
her sence of boredom
her utter lack of devotion

a lie told to Sam without words
false hope leaving him shattered
searching for an answer he finds it within himself
and that forever from this day
he shall be a man
and never let himself be trampeled
by a woman again.

 

[CableLight]

Uugh...dont use the boards as a place to vent that sort of stuff....Just reading it gives me bad memories

 

[Ded_Skin_Mask13]

disgusting filth! it reminds me of my afc times in hell.......

 

[drixsa]

ITS "HIS" not "He's"

you better be a foreigner

 

[Pheonix:ScndrlReborn]

It used to many broken rhymes, and rhymed tonight with tonight, etc, so i revised it.

Originally posted by AfroThunder1986
Well I wrote a poem back awhile ago about Killing the AFC inside and becoming a DJ. So I thought I'd write a poem about an AFC. I only spent 15 mins on it, and I used WORDPAD so it kinda messed up when I pasted it in here. But I hope you enjoy. Thanks, AFRO


Once I knew a man who wanted a girl so much,
he would set and yern just for her touch.
One day he mustered the courage, to ask her out.
And when She said yes, he jumped with a shout.
"Opps I'm sorry please don't be mad;
this turn of events makes me so glad"
"Um ok" said the woman with a low tone.
The guy couldn't wait to tell his friends on the phone!

Oh how he had waited, so very long.
"Now don't mess this up, don't make it go wrong."
But as he thought of her he's heart began to melt.
He put on his american eagle clothing, and shiny black belt.
The time had come to go pick up this girl.
"Oh man" he thought, "I feel like I'll hurl"
He looked in the mirror and gave a pep talk.
.Then out the door he went walking his swaggerly walk.
"Tonights the night" He thought to himself.
"I won't give her any lines, I'll keep my hands to myself."

He arrived at her house just before 7:30,
Which was he decided a little a bit early.
But he wanted everything to go right
on this his first date, his special night.
He got out of he's car and walked up to her home.
The front door opened slowly he let out a moan.
There stood a man about 7 feet tall.
But behind him, the most beautiful girl of all.
"Now young man I except her back before 10."
He nodded his head as he gave a big grin.

"My darling, you look stunning tonight,
I don't think anything in the skies
Has a chance of matching the light,
That emenates from your wat'ry blue eyes.

You are so beautiful I just dropped a pile!!"
"Thanks" she replied with a sheepish smile.

"Where are we going," the girl did say.
"I will take you wherever you may."
"Wherever you want to she said"
"No No No" he shook hishead.
Tonight is about makin u happy and thats what I want to do.
"well pick for goodness sakes, it's all up to you!"
So they pulled into a resturant which looked like a shack.
She became uncorfortable as he stared at her rack,
Soon she was saying, "I want to go back.'
He looked at her and didn't know what to think,
but she was inside the resturant before he could blink.

He rushed to get inside and they were seated,
"You are so very beautiful" he continually repeated.
"Everything about you is so wonderful and great."
"She inturppeted with "Ok, thats about as many complements as I can take."
He replied with, "sorry" as he looked down at the table.
He didn't want her thinking that he was unstable.


She then motioned for the waiter. He came over to the table,
"I just want a club soda, but peel off the label."
"What did I do wrong" he began to moan,
"Oh nothing I just want to get back to my home.

"I'll have what shes having, he replied to the waiter, Frank Gable.
She then slamed her hand forcefully down on the table.
"For once can't you be a man and disagree, don't you see your just to big of a wussy for me. I need a man that can take charge and show me a good time. Unstead of a guy that wants, "A club soda with lime,"
"Oh, I'm sorry I can change for you,
I'll drink whisky, and wear manly shoes!!"
"Thats the problem you see...
you beg constantly to be around me"

"Take me home, I'm done with your company"
"Don't worry about the check, Your soda's on me"
He dropped her off at her place, as she got out of the car
she said.. "thanks for the soda I'll see ya tomorrow.

 

[CableLight]

Re: Re: Afc Poem

Originally posted by Pheonix:ScndrlReborn
It used to many broken rhymes, and rhymed tonight with tonight, etc, so i revised it.

Who cares?

 

[AfroThunder1986]

LOL the "remix" of it sounded good and for your information dix or drix whatever ur name is I'm Hispanic and I was BORN here... so that makes me an AMERICAN! AND A PROUD ONE AT THAT! hehe. I hope most of you enjoyed the poem though. PEACE

 

[drixsa]

Originally posted by AfroThunder1986
LOL the "remix" of it sounded good and for your information dix or drix whatever ur name is I'm Hispanic and I was BORN here... so that makes me an AMERICAN! AND A PROUD ONE AT THAT! hehe. I hope most of you enjoyed the poem though. PEACE

You should learn to be proud of your spelling.

 

[DJ Girevik]

Originally posted by drixsa
You should learn to be proud of your spelling.

Originally posted by drixsa in another thread

(Capitalize it)damn, even if you were caring abot what other people thought(which you shouldnt) so many ppl would kill to have a girl/even wife that had all those qualities(punctuation)

(Capitalize it)espically being able to party hard(punctuation + sentence fragment)

if you fukk this up itll be worse than losing a pretty face(punctuation)

I rest my case, drixsa.

 

[AfroThunder1986]

Don't wanna start a war, lets just all make up. Do I feel a hug coming on? LOL

 

[CrzyBadBoyDJ]

There once was a man from Nantucket
He had a... ah screw it!