Poem

[AfroThunder1986]

Hey guys, I wrote this poem today kinda sums up how I've felt and where im tryin to go. Hope ya like it...HOLLA


I think about it everyday
It makes me more depressed than a rainy day
I say to myself
Why am I alone?
Do I not treat girls with respect
I treat em like a dime a dozen
But I think of myself as nothin
If I respect myself would girls respect me?
There's gotta be a way to get out of this lonely place
Maybe shower them with gifts?
And by myself nothing
Just to get a responce like
"That's so sweet of you"
"But I don't think of you that way"
Awe Is that not what my mother told me
To show girls respect then they would love me.
What is it that I'm missing from all these other guys
Some how I feel like I've been told nothing but lies
I must start a new journey
I must open my eyes
I must take control of my world
I must kill this "nice guy"
Death must come to him
Swift and fast
If anyone has something to say about it
They can kiss my ***
Nomore living in the past
A new day begins.
Freedom at last.

 

[Mikelo2k]

w00t, nice poem! Goin from AFC and beginning your journey as a DJ, nice work

 

[REDblueOI]

LOL!

AWESOME POEM!!! For some reason, whenever there is profanity in poetry it makes me laugh... it just seems so random . Lovin the rhymes baby, gl on your journey!

 

[AfroThunder1986]

Thanks guys, funny thing is that I've showed it to a few of my girlfriends and their saying its "sad" that I feel this way...I basically laughed in their faces.

 

[CableLight]

Not too shabby at all...Hell, I was thinking of posting some of mine on here, too.

 

[The Antichrist_Star]

You know they snap after poetry readings.

*Snaps*
*Snaps*
*Snaps*

There is no spoon...