Please help me with my routine

[zack77766]

This girl is already attracted to me:
ME: (I tap her on the shoulder) Hey Sara how are you doing?
Her: Fine how are you?
Me: Im doing fine myself but can you do me a little favor?
Her: What?
Me: Well I'm selling raffle tickets do you want to buy one? Thr grand prize is ($) and you can always go to Florida just like youve always wanted.
Her: (Says no=fluff rap; Yes=then OK
Me: (I put my arm around her) is this your real number in a flirty way? (The raffle tix asks for number)
Her: Blah blah blah.
Me: Things Ill talk about- Hows school (report cards); why she wants to go to Florida; and what sports she like (shes athletic). Then Ill end with you sound interesting, let me call you sometime.

Add any suggestions and opinions please. Im not sure if Im missing any steps as a DJ so add them, so I dont fail

 

[Grand Wizzard Alamar]

no offense but that approach doesn't sound really DJ to me.
tell us your follow up conversation if you decide to have one.

 

[Sexual]

Yeah, you definitely need some help with that routine.

You did well by making her more comfortable in your approach, but you need to act more interested. Your fluff needs to answer more questions like what she likes to do with her time. It's a key to seduction.

You need to make more of a connection with her and make her feel something. There is no motive for her to give you her number. The way you went up asking for her to buy stuff and then being so straight forward isn't effective. At least you're trying, but your results won't be what you want.

You say she's already attracted to you, but that doesn't mean you should assume that you can get her without more effort.