Need a critique of this apology message I sent to this girl

[jophil28]

She was giving IOIs like leaning on me and i was kinoing her.

You had her in the palm of your hand here ^ and then you negged her so hard that your advantage turned to shyte. . Why? Your DJ job was almost done !

If you are going to neg a chick to amp up her IL then you lay it down like sprinkling salt and pepper on your steak. A little is the right amount. And just like salt and pepper, if you overdo it, you will ruin the taste and F up the meal.

 

[MattS]

Now that i think back since i was wasted thatn ight i only started goin g hard cuz she was texting some people or someone and judging by her body language on how she put her phone down and checking it it was a dude then shes like take me home. Thats why i felt i needed to neg and not try to supplement her. The only thing she kept on telling me was that i was saying stupid sh!t and guess what she only brought up the negs ala mystery candid lines. She started giving IOD's when my friend started ripping on her. she aso thought come to find out later she thought i was lying to her because i said we werer goin gto meet up some people ie other guys but instead i went to meet up my friend who was with a girl and it was just us. but in reality i was going to meet up with my other ffriends but my frined didtn wanna go so i said fvck it. she thoght i was lying. Fvck she is paranoid i know something fvcked up has happened to this b1tch in the past because she is so dam paranoid and unsure of herslef. i m done with her i decided just now i will neverinitiate again

 

[MattS]

Now that i think back since i was wasted thatn ight i only started goin g hard cuz she was texting some people or someone and judging by her body language on how she put her phone down and checking it it was a dude then shes like take me home. Thats why i felt i needed to neg and not try to supplement her. The only thing she kept on telling me was that i was saying stupid sh!t and guess what she only brought up the negs ala mystery candid lines. She started giving IOD's when my friend started ripping on her. she aso thought come to find out later she thought i was lying to her because i said we werer goin gto meet up some people ie other guys but instead i went to meet up my friend who was with a girl and it was just us. but in reality i was going to meet up with my other ffriends but my frined didtn wanna go so i said fvck it. she thoght i was lying. Fvck she is paranoid i know something fvcked up has happened to this b1tch in the past because she is so dam paranoid and unsure of herslef. i m done with her i decided just now i will neverinitiate again

 

[theunflushables]

Yeah Matt, move on. This girl seems like more trouble than she's worth. Lets some poor AFC deal with her bullsh1t.

 

[MattS]

Update: So I call her the next day and we end up talking for an hour as im about to get off the phone im like well blah blah blah come out and she agrees. We hang out and she ended up sleeping over. Obv she starts denying my advances and we talk and talk but she was cuddling with me. We barley sleep i drop her off and i go out that night and get fvcked up.
The next day she starts blowing up my phone to go to a halloween party i said i would go with her. I finally meet her and we go back to my house AGAIN. We go to bed and shes beign a little hot and cold so i try to put my arms around her and she does the move to move my arm away so i back off immediately. I dont remember what was exactly said but I was baiscally hinting like wtf i wanna be sexual. then ame the sutpid sh1t im scared to get close came up and i basically did the mystery kiss close and she denyed so i said i didnt say you could blah blah. Then i was like yea were friends so maybe i should stop becuaes that wouldnt be right if freinds fvck around. she was like its ok sometimes blah blah .Then she says i iknow you want me to rub ur sh1t im like ahhh ok. I keep on sayin yea ur sister is worried about us but all you gotta do is tell her were just frineds and even havent passed first base yet. Right then she accused me of playing games. In which i accused her and i just said no i dont im just being real. we end up falling asleep. we wake up and shes like i hope you dont remember the convo from last night and i said i do. then i just started fvcking with her.
THen i started blanatly calling and texting BACK girls in front of her making comments about texts i was recieveing. We then went to the mall and she busts out "you know you would give me the world if you could" im like i give the world to alot to multiple people. I continue textxting in front and at one point my hooker from vegas- long stroy-calls me and i pick up thtat sh1t right in front of her and make it a point to let herknow i was talking to a girl on the phone.
B!tch in the car before that says i thinki im staying home tonight im like ok.
I drop her off and im like im going out shes like no stay in and sleep. Im like well c. I drop her her off and gave her a cdr she wanted. she gives me a hug and i say ill c ya. Right after i left she texts me you gave me a fake cd its blank. It was a data cd thats why she thought that. I then rpelied an hour later and said "ha". And that was it mostly to reply so she couldnt say i ignored her. Her number is delted i will not call her. She will most likekly call me maybe even tmorrow. but im not caling her and when she calls me i dont kow what ill say but ill figure it out.
This girl is an AW her phone never stops ringing and she talks about all these admirers shehas its ridiculous ive never seen somoenes phone go off that much. there is so many reaosns why she is being like this. I dont give a fck anymore