"You'll Never Feel READY to Walk Over"

Next Monday you'll feel more confident. After the gym you'll feel more confident. After one more drink you'll feel more confident. After you get a better haircut, a better jacket, a better job.

You've been "getting ready" for two years.

She's standing ten feet away right now. She'll be gone in four minutes. No amount of preparation will manufacture the courage that only comes from moving your feet.

Walk over. Stumble through the first sentence. Let it be clumsy. Let it be imperfect. You will feel more alive in those ten seconds than you have all month.

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My site to help you guys

nan3109

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I'm building this site with fitness, supplements, nutrition, campus sex, and gear (fashion/hair/cologne) sections and im going to include alot of articles.

Check out the site and tell me what you think, I'm going to get a .COM address eventually but until then I'm just working on building the site and making graphics/layout

Check it out and leave a reply with comments/feedback if you would. This site is intended to help out fellow DJ's like myself

http://www.geocities.com/ghettomidget469/index.htm
 

"I just moved here from Florida."

That sentence contains at least five follow-up questions she WANTS you to ask. Where in Florida? What brought you here? How long have you been in the area? What do you miss? How does it compare to here?

She handed them to you on a silver platter. And you said, "Oh cool. I come here every week. I love this band. Ummm... pretty crowded tonight."

She smiled politely. Nodded. And never texted you back.

I was that guy for years. Talking too much. Listening too little. Panicking about my next sentence while she was literally feeding me the answers.

Then I found 22 rules that fixed the whole thing. Rule number one: shut up and listen. She'll tell you exactly what to say.

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California Love

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I think your design is very clean and clear. Site feels balanced and colors are warm. However, you should probably date the articles on the front page so that people have a sense of what is recent and what is not. Overall I really like it.
 

gav

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it's well written and looking good

how much do you think a dotcom will cost?

couple of things

article beating the freshman 15
(tiny thing) Under the para Schedule A Time For Yourself, replace "one the go"

i think the first article "beating the freshman 15" needs a conclusion
 
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