My okcupid profile.

[runningonice]

I decided to change things up...and outright lie...and become the man the women on the site are looking for. I posted a candid pic of a model that draws a strong resemblance to myself and has my exact style but takes better pictures.

My Self-Summary
I'm the man you're dreaming of when you're dating Mr. Right Now. I'm an all-encompassing man with class and an edge. I'm quite picky and know what I want and know how to get it.

What I’m doing with my life
Working, living the high life, and dating you lovely ladies.
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I’m really good at
you'll have to find out.
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The first things people usually notice about me
So many to choose from.
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My favorite books, movies, music, and food
I don't have time for books and movies as I'm always on the go.
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The six things I could never do without
I can walk away from anything I ever knew.

I spend a lot of time thinking about
I don't think, I do.
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On a typical Friday night I am
It's always different. Whatever the mood calls for.
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The most private thing I’m willing to admit
I have no secrets.

Already, within 5 minutes of making the profile I'm getting views.

 

[(JJ)]

Already, within 5 minutes of making the profile I'm getting views.

you're probably gonna kill it with that profile honestly. the only issue i can see is the closeness of the "resemblance" that your pic has to your ACTUAL appearance. but hey, they do it too right? getting in person is a huge percentage of dating. to go from texting/phoning/online to being in person changes the game an immense amount, and you're gonna get more of a shot with that.

 

[Pimp-sicle]

I decided to change things up...and outright lie...and become the man the women on the site are looking for. I posted a candid pic of a model that draws a strong resemblance to myself and has my exact style but takes better pictures.

My Self-Summary
I'm the man you're dreaming of when you're dating Mr. Right Now. I'm an all-encompassing man with class and an edge. I'm quite picky and know what I want and know how to get it.

This summary is solid, well written and conveys confidence...

What I’m doing with my life
Working, living the high life, and dating you lovely ladies.
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A little cheesy and over the top... "living the high life?" LOL I like that you suggest competition though, solid.
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I’m really good at
you'll have to find out.
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Not bad, generic but not bad.
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The first things people usually notice about me
So many to choose from.
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Hello Mr. Cheez Whizz.... definitely change this. Your coming off as more into yourself than anything else, which in an online dating scene will kill your chances. Add some realism to this profile. Its akin to the newscaster who always talks in his "newscaster voice" even when he's off the job. Girls smell bullshyt a mile away, not to mention someone who's trying to hard to look like he's NOT trying too hard.


My favorite books, movies, music, and food
I don't have time for books and movies as I'm always on the go.
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Definitely change this, if you truly don't read, leave it blank or make up some $hit here. But your "always on the go" statement in regards to reading is just a bad statement to make.... pick up a book if you don't read in real life...


The six things I could never do without
I can walk away from anything I ever knew.

I spend a lot of time thinking about
I don't think, I do.
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Again your building up the persona of who you think women want, but won't be able to stand up to what your saying and will quickly lose. Stop trying to hard to look suave. Its like the guy at a party who says a funny joke, then keeps telling bad ones the rest of the night because he thinks that's what they want to hear.


On a typical Friday night I am
It's always different. Whatever the mood calls for.
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This is good, but it would be better if you add in a few examples..

The most private thing I’m willing to admit
I have no secrets.

Ehh, this is a dumb question... no one is gonna to admit anything of substance.

Already, within 5 minutes of making the profile I'm getting views.

PIMP

 

[runningonice]

Thanks for the imput. I changed a few things...I got rid of the "high life" part...for the "what people usually notice about me" I say "You'd have to ask other people.". For the books/movies question (I do read occasionally btw) I said "Who has time to sit in and watch movies with so many better things to do?"

 

[Desdinova]

I've had rotten luck with OkCupid. I seem to get better success with POF.

 

[Serg897]

Okcupid has led to several dates and lays for me in 2010. Its a good site.

 

[f283000]

I've had rotten luck with OkCupid. I seem to get better success with POF.

OKCupid seems to have better quality females. On POF every single baby moma in one's city is on it