Man I lost the race, Lost my mind, Lost my calm.

[moneyisking]

I failed, but I kept my head up high.
I kept crashing, but I kept going by.
I felt like sh!t, but I made me a promise.
That I will keep improving even if I don't succeed.
I have practiced, and I found this chick.
I practiced on her, but nothing too big.
Yet I found a glimpse of hope b/c I always failed.
Yet I find out my friend bedded her.
I can move along, but this I am sad.
Why the Fvck is it always me, the least for her to bed.
I crawled out of the pitch just to see again that I am just a b!tch.
My years of learning did me no good, and my heart burns with fire.

What is it that I am doing wrong?
B/c I am not white or black or hispanic?
As far as I know, my race don't matter if my personality don't shatter.
I am not going to stop, I am going to keep moving.
For I am a man of my own promise and doing.
But as a failure for now I am, I am truly sad.
It's not just about her and the bed...
It's that I still don't get what it takes for game...

God damn it, really, what the hell is there to fvck a chick? Fvck Fvck Fvck

 

[Soprano]

I failed, but I kept my head up high.
I kept crashing, but I kept going by.
I felt like sh!t, but I made me a promise.
That I will keep improving even if I don't succeed.
I have practiced, and I found this chick.
I practiced on her, but nothing too big.
Yet I found a glimpse of hope b/c I always failed.
Yet I find out my friend bedded her.
I can move along, but this I am sad.
Why the Fvck is it always me, the least for her to bed.
I crawled out of the pitch just to see again that I am just a b!tch.
My years of learning did me no good, and my heart burns with fire.

What is it that I am doing wrong?
B/c I am not white or black or hispanic?
As far as I know, my race don't matter if my personality don't shatter.
I am not going to stop, I am going to keep moving.
For I am a man of my own promise and doing.
But as a failure for now I am, I am truly sad.
It's not just about her and the bed...
It's that I still don't get what it takes for game...

God damn it, really, what the hell is there to fvck a chick? Fvck Fvck Fvck

wtf??? did u just write a ****ing poem??

 

[Vice]

wtf??? did u just write a ****ing poem??

I was thinking the EXACT same thing.

Nothing rhymes though. Poems are supposed to RHYME!

 

[thecurtainfalls]

Just ask the girl if she wants to see your iambic pentameter. If she runs away screaming, it wasn't meant to be.

 

[moneyisking]

I just want to express the sh!tty feeling i am currently having right now... man this really makes me feel down as fvck.

 

[DJDamage]

Your best bet was to forget about it and working on your game,
Instead of wasting time on this poem, while feeling like sh1t & sounding lame.

 

[moneyisking]

eat **** b!tch

 

[zekko]

In the old days guys wrote poetry to women who inspired them.
I wonder if this would be a good or AFC thing to do today? I tend to think a girl might enjoy it.
I don't think I've ever seen this discussed on this forum.

Have you ever tried writing a girl a poem?
The only risky thing is then they have it and can say "look at what that dweeb wrote to me".
Anyway, keep working on improving your inner game and don't lose hope.

 

[moneyisking]

nah haha i would never write a woman poem or anything that shows affection. since girls are stupid and retarded these days, they see good deeds and favors and run away, and i learned that.

 

[DonGorgon]

just relax and get some drugs and or alcahol into the equation. that what most people do..

 

[omega05]

wtf??? did u just write a ****ing poem??

Same thing I was thinking