Why "Whatever You Want" Keeps You Single

She says the movie looks dumb; you suddenly agree. She tests you with a little attitude; you apologize for nothing.

You think you're being easy to get along with. She reads something else entirely: a man with no edges. Nothing to hold on to. No friction, no tension, no reason to wonder what he really thinks.

The "22 Rules" taught me to push back — playfully, calmly, without needing her approval. Strange things happened after that.

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Every sentence a paragraph?

Atom Smasher

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What's with this new influx of people who write every single sentence as a paragraph?

Don't they realize it makes it hard to read?

It's like talking to someone who says, "Umm" after every sentence.

This seems like a relatively new phenomenon.

It used to be that guys would throw a massive wall of text up on the screen.

There would be absolutely no paragraphs used, and these posts were way too much work to read.

Now guys are doing this thing with every sentence being a paragraph.

Isn't this a little hard to read, and distracting?

I believe they are doing this because their actual thoughts are disjointed.

Therefore that disjointedness is reflected in their writing style.

Whatever the reason, it's distracting and shows poor communication skills.

Paragraphs serve to arrange thoughts and to present them in a meaningful manner.

It is assumed that in a paragraph, the other sentences contained within support a certain concept or point.

But when each sentence is a paragraph, each one is a separate entity and one sentence does not support or elaborate upon another.

In other words, they are equally weighted.

This makes for very difficult reading, and for miscommunication.

I wonder how they got through school writing this way.

A massive amount of information is lost due to this inefficient and inaccurate style of writing.

Paragraphs are an integral, indispensable part of written communications.

They count enormously in how one's points are received.

When you write like this, your points become lost and stagnant.

Don't they?

I think they do.

I'll have to think of a name for this style of "writing", and for those who use it.

It's gotten so bad that I rarely even read what they write anymore.

I usually skim their posts because the way they write forces me to work too hard.

I have to mentally put their sentences together into paragraphs in order to extract accurate meaning.

It is not fair to the reader to foist that work upon him.

The purpose of paragraphs is to arrange your thoughts, convey them accurately, and to facilitate one sentence supporting another.

Giving each sentence equal weight cannot possibly convey your intended meaning.

This bad habit should have been corrected decades ago in school.

It is perhaps true, however, that this habit has been picked up recently.

Possibly because of texting and social media.

Whatever the cause, it hurts you and it hurts the reader as it masks the intended meaning of your communication.

Thanks for reading, if you made it this far.
 

"She Laughed All Night. Then She Ghosted You. Here's Why."

Dinner ran three hours. She laughed at everything. You walked her to her car thinking this one's locked in.

Then: nothing. Two texts. No reply. What happened?

You did what most men do on a great date. You filled every silence, answered every question, and left her with nothing to wonder about. No mystery. Nothing to sit with when she got home.

Rule 3 of the "22 Rules" changes the ending: tell her a little, hold back the rest, and let her imagination do the chasing. The ghosting stops too.

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Thanks for your wisdom atom smasher.

It's definitely something I need to improve on.

But I think it's better than a never ending wall of text.

See what I did there?
 

"The Coffee Shop Girl You Never Spoke To"

You've replayed it a hundred times. She stood three feet away, scrolling her phone. You had an opening. You composed the perfect line — after she was gone.

For all you know, she's married now. To some guy who said something. Anything.

Openers are cheap. Almost any sentence works when it's delivered within three seconds. The expensive part is the standing there, drafting and deleting, while the window quietly closes.

The "22 Rules" stripped out my hesitation. What to open with, how to keep it alive, and the one habit that costs guys more women than anything else: waiting for perfect.

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I'm probably guilty of this. I find very LONG paragraphs painful to read, and I compensate by using very short paragraphs. It's funny you should mention this. Someone editing my writing at work combined a few short paragraphs into one big one. Anyway, good post. Thanks.
 

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I got in the habit of writing that way from an idiot woman I work with. If you wrote a regular paragraph she would selectively only read what she wanted out of it.. and then say she didn't notice the rest and try to wiggle her way out of being accountable for the parts you said that she didn't want to deal with. So I started writing the one liners so they would be nice and noticeable for her. She would also complain if you wrote too much. she was so bad that I actually have sent her spreadsheets that she refused to look at because there were too many colors in them and they bothered her eyes. So anyway the habit of one paragraph lines has carried over outside of work..
 

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SamTheHobit said:
Thanks for your wisdom atom smasher.

It's definitely something I need to improve on.

But I think it's better than a never ending wall of text.

See what I did there?
You

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"I'm Not Looking for Anything Serious Right Now"

When a woman says it, guys hear a confession. A heads-up. A scheduling conflict.

Here's the translation: I don't feel anything. Right now. With you.

Watch what happens when a man triggers actual attraction. The busy career, the recent breakup, the "not in a place to date" — all of it evaporates instantly. The same woman who was guarding her freedom is suddenly free every night.

The "22 Rules" explain why. When the right switches flip, her timeline rearranges itself around you.

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I think we should all post in haiku.
 

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I think its about aesthetics.

Broken up paragraphs looks less daunting to the brain in the world of text, and chat messengers. People even truncate words nowadays.

I think this first started in email. In an email you are not supposed to space paragraphs but only indent them. I think when email first started to take hold as inter office communication and then later, global communication, it became courtesy to keep email short to avoid scrolling and printed waste. Large screen resolutions made for a lot of scrolling. Printers took a min or more to print a page.

Furthermore, thread like forums such as ours where there is limited on the fly manipulation of the text to suit the reader, the writer tries to compensate by writing what would make it easier for HIM to read.

I break up paragraphs even when I know its grammatically incorrect to make it easier on the reader to grasp the concept of the thought.


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For comparison:

I think its about aesthetics.
Broken up paragraphs looks less daunting to the brain in the world of text, and chat messengers. People even truncate words nowadays.
I think this first started in email. In an email you are not supposed to space paragraphs but only indent them. I think when email first started to take hold as inter office communication and then later, global communication, it became courtesy to keep email short to avoid scrolling and printed waste. Large screen resolutions made for a lot of scrolling. Printers took a min or more to print a page.
Furthermore, thread like forums such as ours where there is limited on the fly manipulation of the text to suit the reader, the writer tries to compensate by writing what would make it easier for HIM to read.
I break up paragraphs even when I know its grammatically incorrect to make it easier on the reader to grasp the concept of the thought.



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Even worse is this:

I think its about aesthetics.Broken up paragraphs looks less daunting to the brain in the world of text, and chat messengers. People even truncate words nowadays. I think this first started in email. In an email you are not supposed to space paragraphs but only indent them. I think when email first started to take hold as inter office communication and then later, global communication, it became courtesy to keep email short to avoid scrolling and printed waste. Large screen resolutions made for a lot of scrolling. Printers took a min or more to print a page.Furthermore, thread like forums such as ours where there is limited on the fly manipulation of the text to suit the reader, the writer tries to compensate by writing what would make it easier for HIM to read.I break up paragraphs even when I know its grammatically incorrect to make it easier on the reader to grasp the concept of the thought.
 

“The 22 Psychological Triggers That Make Women Chase You… Starting Tonight”

Forget the cash, the cars, and the chiseled jawlines. Female desire operates on a completely different frequency. Primal. Subconscious. Triggers that bypass her logic and hit her on a gut level. Most guys are totally blind to them.

I know because I was one of them. The overthinking. The paralysis. The silent drive home kicking yourself for freezing up. Watching average guys walk away with the girl while you stood there stuck in your own head.

Then I decoded the psychology behind what actually makes women tick. 22 hard rules.  Subtle behavioral shifts that rewired my entire reality. The anxiety evaporated. Women started leaning in. Investing. Chasing.

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The opening post was extremely easy to read because of the small screen size. That is because I am accessing the forum on the phone.

More and more people are using the phone to access the net, it explains why the use of single paragraphs: easier to read and easier to type. It is for practical reasons rather then dumbing down.
 

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Aah...the dreaded one-liners!
 

"I'm Not Looking for Anything Serious Right Now"

When a woman says it, guys hear a confession. A heads-up. A scheduling conflict.

Here's the translation: I don't feel anything. Right now. With you.

Watch what happens when a man triggers actual attraction. The busy career, the recent breakup, the "not in a place to date" — all of it evaporates instantly. The same woman who was guarding her freedom is suddenly free every night.

The "22 Rules" explain why. When the right switches flip, her timeline rearranges itself around you.

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