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[King Turi]

Hey, I just made this track last night, only took about half an hour or so, but I reckon it's kinda cool, doesn't have any lyrics as yet, but it definitely has room for them.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BwRL7B2XQu4

If you could listen to it and tell me what you think of it, I'd greatly appreciate it, it might seem to drag on a little but that's only because I intend to have lyrics over it, so it has room for verses, choruses, bridge and even a key change for a little part towards the end.. but yeah.. just after some comments, good or bad, all are appreciated.

 

[f283000]

I liked it! although I would move the transition (1 minute mark part, correct me on the right term) a little sooner because it got a little repetitive. Maybe move it to the 40 second mark or so.

 

[King Turi]

Cheers for the comment!

Yeah I know what part you mean, where it goes from my "verse" to the "chorus", the "verse" parts probably do drag on a little too long.. but it was meant to have lyrics over it, so I wasn't sure how much room to leave for a "verse" or what not :/

 

[Rho]

imo i think you need to speed it up a fraction to 95-100bpm, that also may cure repetitiveness mentioned by f283000