Bi*chy Boyfriend situation

[The Cooler King]

ok, heres the story.

I met this HB8 at work.
Great boobs.

The whole summer that I worked I busted the C&F on her the whole time.
She would be like why are you so mean to me?

But I could tell she was having a good time.


So I decided to call her to see whats up.

After about 15-20 min. he started *****ing.

Like how he noticed all guys are looking at her ass but she dont notice that.
And got all pissed that she was talking to another guy.

And they both started aurging...like big time....with me on the phone.

She was saying how she never gets mad at the girls he talks to blah blah.

Then he was like he's talking to you cause he wants you.
she then asks me...do you want me?
I'm like noo, I rather take that crazy girl from work over you.

But he still *****ed.




My cuz was saying **** about him and he came close to going after him.

Anyway to get around this?

 

[sikpupy]

I lost you at "So I decided to call her to see whats up.".

I dont understand?????

 

[The Cooler King]

Originally posted by sikpupy
I lost you at "So I decided to call her to see whats up.".

I dont understand?????

Ya, to talk about what happened at work since I been at school.

Apprently a lot has happened.




...its not that confusing, nor is that part important.

 

[Tyron]

Im lost Anyway, seems like too much trouble for my taste whatever is happening.

 

[The Cooler King]

Originally posted by Tyron
Im lost Anyway, seems like too much trouble for my taste whatever is happening.

How are you lost?

I have no idea how this is confusing people.

 

[[o_0]]

i dont understand

 

[SparkleMotion]

Originally posted by The Cooler King

So I decided to call her to see whats up.

After about 15-20 min. he started *****ing.

It's confusing becuase you don't effectively tell your story. Such as in this part you immediately go from saying her to he. So you leave the reader having to blindly guess who 'he' is or if it's suppose to be 'she' and you had a typo. You also don't give much of a background to the story, so we don't know exactly how you got her phone number or why you are calling, though you somewhat explain later in a reply when someone said they are confused.

 

[nectarine]

You can't get around it.

He's there and you're not. He put up with it for 20 minutes, more than reasonable, and then he kicked off. If it comes down to it he can tell her right there to put the phone down or **** off. About the only thing you can or should do is say 'I can see this is causing a problem, I'll call you later, bye' and put the phone down. It's the only graceful way to deal with it.

The moral of this story is, don't call girls for 20 minutes when they're with their boyfriends.

 

[wowiehowie]

Learn how to communicate through the written word.

I too don't understand what-choo be sayin'

Werd?

 

[PRMoon]

Please make complete thoughts when typing a story or laying a situaion or story. This one makes no sense to any one oh king of cool.

 

[Scrumtulescence]

I'd recommend staying away from hermaphrodites.

 

[The Cooler King]

Originally posted by SparkleMotion
It's confusing becuase you don't effectively tell your story. Such as in this part you immediately go from saying her to he. So you leave the reader having to blindly guess who 'he' is or if it's suppose to be 'she' and you had a typo. You also don't give much of a background to the story, so we don't know exactly how you got her phone number or why you are calling, though you somewhat explain later in a reply when someone said they are confused.

I dont do typos.
He as in the boyfriend.

I gave her my cell, and she didnt call it for the longest time.
I told my cuz that still works there to bug her a bit. Like tell her I said this jeering comment to her (forgot what it was).

And she called me.
So I logged her number.


When I stopped by the place I worked over fall break she was there.
She just turned 21 and she said she could get me booze and she wanted to goto like a haunted hayride. So I'm like ok call me when you want to.

She never did.

When I called her just recently shes like you never called me for the hayride. I'm like what?! You were supposed to call me.
And she tried to come off as the right one but she didnt.

Originally posted by nectarine
You can't get around it.

He's there and you're not. He put up with it for 20 minutes, more than reasonable, and then he kicked off. If it comes down to it he can tell her right there to put the phone down or **** off. About the only thing you can or should do is say 'I can see this is causing a problem, I'll call you later, bye' and put the phone down. It's the only graceful way to deal with it.

The moral of this story is, don't call girls for 20 minutes when they're with their boyfriends.

you dont know hes there until its too late...then again hes there most of the time.

Originally posted by PRMoon
Please make complete thoughts when typing a story or laying a situaion or story. This one makes no sense to any one oh king of cool.

It does make sense. You dont make sense.

King of cool?

I believe its the cooler king.

Cooler as in jail.


Ever seen The Great Escape?
That was Steve McQueen's nickname in the movie.

He's one of my favorite actors cause of his badass image.

Check him out, you might get some style for your game.

 

[gongxia649]

Don't understand at all. And i thought my English is really bad.

 

[Gonzalo]

From what I could... um, descipher, this girl has a boyfriend? (aka "he"). If so, it's reallya blind shot. Why on earth would you want to talk and hang on the phone while a girl has a couple fight with her BF?

Either try some smoother approach to the whole 'making her cheat' thing (bad idea in my opinion), or wait for her to be over with the BF (which, if they're having couple fights, shouldn't be too long if you play your cards right).

G

 

[an_old_rusty_master]

"me don't understand either, strange way of writing you have, much to learn you need," said Yoda to journalists yesterday.

Reuters

 

[PRMoon]

Originally posted by The Cooler King

It does make sense. You dont make sense.

King of cool?

I believe its the cooler king.

Cooler as in jail.


Ever seen The Great Escape?
That was Steve McQueen's nickname in the movie.

He's one of my favorite actors cause of his badass image.

Check him out, you might get some style for your game.

Having Steve McQueen as a an image isn't at all a bad idea, however I doubt watching his movies or reading his bio's could do anything to improve my already substantial game.

And no your story does not make any sense. It lacks those things...what are they called?...oh yeah complete sentences and thoughts. I hope you understand where I'm coming from...all though my complete thoughts and sentances apparently don't make sense to you for some reason?