Bad Move?

[amnbyrd]

So theres this girl Ive seen around and actually met/talked to at this volunteer event about a month or so ago. I didnt numbr close though I sometimes see her around and talk for a bit. Well shes into cars as am I. Anyways today I was working on my car in the parking lot and I dropped a screw and a friend and I were trying to reach it. Well she drove by and stopped and was like"you still working on your car" I was like "let me see your hands. Are they small." She held her hands up and I told her I dropped a screw and couldnt reach it. She got out and was able to reach in and get it for me. Right after she had to leave though to change and head off to work. Well I just left her a note on a card that I put on her windshied wiper saying " Thanks again for getting my screw out... still think Im a ****y stuckup *******? thats always working on my cars. And left my name and number.
The last comment was from when we 1st met she said that was her assumption of me from seeing me around and always working on my cars.
Was this a bad move or??

 

[amnbyrd]

Anyone??

 

[Bussey]

Well... you've put the ball in her court by giving her your number. Which I don't like.
You also said 'Still think...." which could/should reinforce any preconceived notion she has about you. Which in this case isn't a positive one.

So in those terms I don't like it...

What I do like is the note on the car. Could be an interesting move, but I think it be better if you added a little bit of a game to it.. add some light humor to it... Don't leave a callback number...

In my mind, the ideal is you write it so that she has to write her own and put it on your windshield. Creates a game, and something unique she will have never seen before.

Idea - 6/7
Content - 2/7

 

[ready123]

do you normally talk like that to her?

 

[amnbyrd]

do you normally talk like that to her?

Like what exactly?