"She's Out of Your League"

You've said it a hundred times. Maybe a thousand. And every time you say it, you train your brain to freeze the next time she walks into the room.

Leagues are a myth invented by guys who are scared of women.

She's a person. She has bad breath in the morning. She picks songs she can't sing in the shower. She overthinks her own texts.

Walk over. Say something. The league dissolves the second you open your mouth.

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Anyone else watching Bonnie and Clyde?

backbreaker

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this ***** Bonnie is freaking rutheless.

Clyde would have been okay if not for trying to make this devil girl happy.
 

"The Coffee Shop Girl You Never Spoke To"

You've replayed it a hundred times. She stood three feet away, scrolling her phone. You had an opening. You composed the perfect line — after she was gone.

For all you know, she's married now. To some guy who said something. Anything.

Openers are cheap. Almost any sentence works when it's delivered within three seconds. The expensive part is the standing there, drafting and deleting, while the window quietly closes.

The "22 Rules" stripped out my hesitation. What to open with, how to keep it alive, and the one habit that costs guys more women than anything else: waiting for perfect.

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It will end up getting panned due to portraying a woman negatively, though that won't be the ostensible reason given. Women do not like watching negative portrayals of women as the main character unless the character in question is cartoonish, clownish or there is some positive female foil they can identify with in an equally prominent role. There's not in B&C, so it will annoy the female audience. This is why we don't have nearly as many female antiheroes or realistic villains in movies and tv as male antiheroes and such.
 

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How many times they going to do this story, like they pushing some kind of agenda to the masses.
 
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