Need help with dating profile

[WrEcKLeSS2000]

Hey guys,

I need your help with my dating profile not that it will make a huge difference with the kind of trashy women on dating sites but here it is...

Please feel free to edit/add stuff to make it better.

I'm a young professional that is very family oriented, and love sports (but then again what guy doesn’t). I love to play tennis, swim and spend time hanging out with friends. I’m an easy going person and try to stay clear of any drama. My dreams are to flourish in my career while moving up the ladder and who knows maybe get my own reality tv show in the process.

In the mean time I enjoy working and I am fortunate enough to have a job that I love. My favorite music consists of rock, county, and oldies. However I’m open to listening to anything original. I’m a music junkie so I don’t mind other genre’s. In my free time I enjoy reading, dancing, and most of all traveling. I’m looking for a woman I can vibe with on a spiritual and intellectual level. Someone who can teach me new things and inspire me.


Thanks.

 

[John Constantine]

Hey guys,

I need your help with my dating profile not that it will make a huge difference with the kind of trashy women on dating sites but here it is...

Please feel free to edit/add stuff to make it better.

I'm a young professional that is very family oriented, and love sports (but then again what guy doesn’t). I love to play tennis, swim and spend time hanging out with friends. I’m an easy going person and try to stay clear of any drama. My dreams are to flourish in my career while moving up the ladder and who knows maybe get my own reality tv show in the process.

In the mean time I enjoy working and I am fortunate enough to have a job that I love. My favorite music consists of rock, county, and oldies. However I’m open to listening to anything original. I’m a music junkie so I don’t mind other genre’s. In my free time I enjoy reading, dancing, and most of all traveling. I’m looking for a woman I can vibe with on a spiritual and intellectual level. Someone who can teach me new things and inspire me.


Thanks.

If it's your bio on tinder, it's lame. You won't get a lot of match with this kind of bio. Be concise, funny and original
something like :

I live alone

I'm a good cook

owner of a car

I love my mom and maybe your's too

I got a bio similar to that and it allows the girl to open the conversation more often with something like : Ohnn I love guy that love their mom or I love guy that can cook

 

[sosousage]

I think good idea is to summon @guru1000 hes the only person on this site that has some good iimpact from old

 

[WrEcKLeSS2000]

I'm using Plenty of Fish not Tinder.

 

[John Constantine]

I think good idea is to summon @guru1000 hes the only person on this site that has some good iimpact from old

I think you got it wrong.. Not because YOU don't have any success with OLD means that everyone is not having success with it. Unless they look like complete trolls and got a ****ty bio

 

[John Constantine]

I'm using Plenty of Fish not Tinder.

Same thing with POF

 

[Young OG]

Hey guys,

I need your help with my dating profile not that it will make a huge difference with the kind of trashy women on dating sites but here it is...

Please feel free to edit/add stuff to make it better.

I'm a young professional that is very family oriented, and love sports (but then again what guy doesn’t). I love to play tennis, swim and spend time hanging out with friends. I’m an easy going person and try to stay clear of any drama. My dreams are to flourish in my career while moving up the ladder and who knows maybe get my own reality tv show in the process.

In the mean time I enjoy working and I am fortunate enough to have a job that I love. My favorite music consists of rock, county, and oldies. However I’m open to listening to anything original. I’m a music junkie so I don’t mind other genre’s. In my free time I enjoy reading, dancing, and most of all traveling. I’m looking for a woman I can vibe with on a spiritual and intellectual level. Someone who can teach me new things and inspire me.


Thanks.

Its way to long. Most girls won't even read the whole thing. I would cut it in half and add something funny.

 

[sosousage]

I think you got it wrong.. Not because YOU don't have any success with OLD means that everyone is not having success with it. Unless they look like complete trolls and got a ****ty bio

Is this why you made a thread recently about 4 flakes from OLD?

Ps my first post was a bit of irony

 

[Billtx49]

Make a list of the personality points you want to advertise. Then donate one sentence to each one and blend them together.
Make no mistake, it is advertising, so Google for the most effective means to advertise in a short amount of time.
Think of it as a 20-30 sec. TV spot, because that’s about all the time she will spend reading your profile unless she loves your pic Or unless you hook her with a zinger at the start of her read…